“Modern writing at its worst does not consist in picking out words for the sake of their meaning and inventing images in order to make the meaning clearer. It consists in gumming together long strips of words which have already been set in order by someone else, and making the results presentable by sheer humbug…[thus] it can be taken as certain that the writer is not seeing a mental image of the objects he is naming; in other words he is not thinking.”
Aptly named “Politics and the English Language;” George Orwell defines the essence of what writing has become and how it should be tamed. He explains that grammar and syntax come second to the meaning and are often unimportant if one’s meaning is clear.
“What is above all needed is to let the meaning choose the word, and not the other way around. When you think of a concrete object, you think wordlessly, and then, if you want to describe the thing you have been visualizing you probably hunt about until you find the exact words that seem to fit it. When you think of something abstract you are more inclined to use words from the start, and unless you make a conscious effort to prevent it, the existing dialect will come rushing in and do the job for you, at the expense of blurring or even changing your meaning.”
Published in 1946, it seems somewhat difficult that I just recently heard about this and even more so that it is so spot on. Save yourself from the flowery and verbose rhetoric that happens to spill from the mouths of our Politicians and practice rhetorical heresy with a few simple rules:
- Never use a metaphor, simile, or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
- Never us a long word where a short one will do.
- If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
- Never use the passive where you can use the active.
- Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word, or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
- Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.
In addition Orwell lends his knowledge to say that “a scrupulous writer, in every sentence that he writes, will ask himself at least four questions:”
- What am I trying to say?
- What words will express it?
- What images or idiom will make it clearer?
- Is this image fresh enough to have an effect?
Now I can only leave you with the hope that I have made a point. If not perhaps you will need further insight. – “Politics and the English Language”